On Love

Love.
The array of colors surrounding that word.
Rainbows of nothingness
Immensity.
Desire. Purity.
Color. Life. Birth.
Rebirth.
Awareness.
Fullness. Emptiness.
Sharing. Dividing.
BANG!
Vulnerability. Sanity.
Insane.
Light.
Darkness.
There is one
Place
I
Will
Bring
You
I’m
Not
Sure
You’ll
Return
Wanna
Come?

~ by Aquatic Poetry on August 31, 2011.

2 Responses to “On Love”

  1. Found the flow of the poem very effective in drawing me into the poem.

  2. I think a poem becomes very expressive when it’s short sentenced, like this: BANG. FLOAT. FOLLY. EXHALE. etc.
    I rather like playing around with words and styles, because I don’t feel bound to poetry in a certain form.
    AND I always appreciate your comments🙂

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