golden nectar

To explode like a dusty rainbow.

Fall like bricks on moist ground.

Being absorbed by roots

deep and damp.

Down down

to the core.

Where

sense lies

awake and the senseless are

not in sight. Foul would it be to say

that I’m satisfied. I have not yet found the

nectar, that which is sweet, like dwelling  purpose ?

~ by Aquatic Poetry on March 30, 2012.

2 Responses to “golden nectar”

  1. The metaphors used convey the tone and mood of the poem very well.

  2. thank you. enjoy spring!

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